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Monday 11 December 2017

PBL reflection


-Evaluation questions
Minimum sentence requirements

-Explain what your group did for your PBL, what was and was not successful, and why.
For project based learning my group did suicide prevention.As a group the people in it didn't work,but in the end it was fine.What did work was our planning we got a plan sorted in about 20 minutes.We did a bake sale which was fun we managed to raise $60 to send to youth-line.We also planned to do a mural which we didn't manage to get done but have plans to do it on the holiday's.

-Explain whether your group achieved your goals and why or why not
We achieved 1 of our goals which was to get the bake sale done.We got is done bye persevering
and good time management.As I said we didn't achieve the mural.We didn't achieve it because of the lack of time management towards the end.

-Describe and explain YOUR PERSONAL ACTIONS IN THE enriching or improving the lives of others
My actions-I did the slides took me a while but I managed to finish,I also did the speech on what our group did,I baked for the bake.

-Explain what you would do differently next time and why
Time management,I guess the fact that it is the end of the year got on top of everyone meaning everyone was tired and wasn't motivated to do it .
Also choosing my peers wisely it became a bountiful amount of stress on me as my peers didn't do any work,I ended up taking lunchtimes and even staying after school to get the work done.

Monday 4 December 2017

PBL

Week 2
Ideas week-We finally came up with a solid plan ,we are on checkpoint 5 at this point in time and we are exited to get things rolling,our plan is to do a bake sale exiting am i right,also we will hopefully get mural done if we can get the "ok" from Mr Sutton which were able to do" YAY"

Project based learning

Week 1
So we are getting started, getting our ideas on the table and choosing a subject
many subjects have come to mind like LGBT which is a big subject and same with family violence.
But the one that really stood out to us was suicide prevention so that is what we are going with.We managed to finish checkpoint 1-3 this week and after we fix the rest of checkpoint 3 we will be onto doing our tasks.

We also had to come up with our name which we decided TREEhouse just for fun

Tuesday 31 October 2017

English-Risk/challenge Recount writing

Have you ever been so scared you could just die?It started when I went to a family bonfire at my uncle Alan’s farm, we had a metal band (unite the silence) playing in the backyard , everyone their drinks in their hands singing along to the music, the bbq flaring with tender steak sizzling away, the sounds of giggling children floated through the air like butterflies.

It was dinner time, we all sat down and ate our food made by our amazing cooks, everyone was talking away about the latest gossip in the family.After dinner, everyone sat down and roasted marshmallows while soaking up the heat projected by the flames. The marshmallows melted in my mouth gooey and delicious, I could feel the warmth flowing through my body like I was rapped in a warm blanket tiring my eyes.It was getting late, we got sent to bed and all of us lay on the couches in the lounges talking until our eyes started to clamp together.

Dani….wake up come, ”said a quiet voice as I slowly tuned into the world around me.I saw my cousins standing around.”Get your coat and  shoes we are going for a walk.”Natasha my older cousin told me where we were going as I put my shoes on”Remember how were joking  about sneaking to the  abandoned  house at the farm next door?”Tash said,”oh man really….. ok I’ll come.”I replied in a weary voice.My stomach tied itself up as my aunt had told us about how she saw something moving at that house we all thought she was joking I didn't though but I sucked It up and we started walking.

As we got to the house we could all see that we were all scared but Natasha and her brother Zack kept it well hidden.We had been there for about 10 tedious minutes before we actually went inside.The door screeched open we knew that the house was decrepit. The floorboards creaked as we took the first step the crackling the old kitchen pots violently dancing with the wind pushed us to the edge of our nerves.After searching the house to see what was there we decided to play a game of hiding and go seek.No one really wanted to, but we decided to be bold and tough and do it.Zack was in 1,2,3,4, I sprint to a ragged old shearing house not realizing I was alone I jumped the fences and hid behind a tower of hay bales with only the moon as my light as I sat in a nest made of hay.”I’m gonna get you.”A voice whispered in the distance, everything went quiet I was alone the wind was whistling through the holes in the roof and the sound of the fences tinkering together taunted me.The darkness wrapped its arms around me holding me tight, all of a sudden I heard a loud bang.The shed door slammed shut and I wasn't able to get out.Someone was coming but It wasn't zack I heard him trying to find Natasha and Jaz in the distance.Someone else was there with us, I had to get out I could get through the hole in the roof while being quite but also getting cut up or get the saw and saw a hole in the wall?My head was spinning My heart was racing My blood was pumping and adrenaline flowed through my veins.I decided to take the easy way out.I rapidly grabbed the hay bales and stacked them up as quietly as I could and crept up them slowly but surely But I had underestimated the size of the hole and I knew there was no way I was getting through It without getting seriously hurt.I grabbed a hammer out of a worn-out toolbox to try and chip away the rusted edges of the hole to try an make it wider.It worked I jumped onto the roof and climbed down a pole that I found on the side of the shed and started running.It started chasing me I was scared out of my mind until the chaser came into the light,” found you” said everyone they were all looking for me they all came up with a master plan to scare me.”Haha…..good one.”I replied sarcastically.

I learned not to let my thoughts get twisted up and learned a few survival skills along the way.

Wednesday 25 October 2017

Social Studies

In social studies my group that consists of Noah Sefo ,Alyssa Wright,and myself have been working on project  cyclone Nargis a terrible event that costed many people their lives also causing earthquakes and disrupting the people of Myanmar's daily lives.

Wednesday 13 September 2017

Persuasive writing

13 September 2017                                             


Dear potential sponsor


I am writing to you because I am looking for sponsors and I hope you can partake in being one of them.I am 15 years  of age ,I am from district eleven ,and  this is the first time i have been nominated to compete in the annual hunger games here are a few valid reasons why you should sponsor me…...


I have trained myself to be quick,smart,strong,and i am unstoppable with a sword.I train with my father  and I have risen to defeat him in combat..I can make shelter out of essentially  anything,and my hunting skills are sublime .I am exceptional at hiding and I can think fast in a high pressure situation..I believe I can win,I believe that I will rise to be preeminent can annihilate the rest but I need your help to get there,I need your help to  dominate the rest  and together we can both be victorious.


Do you really want the next leader to be  weak or do you want to sponsor someone that can help her whole district rise to victory.


Kind regards



Dani Broadhurst